Use an Online Grammar Checker to Perfect Your Work

I write a lot about grammar in my writing 101 posts, because it's always difficult. There are tons of rules in the English language, and they're pretty easy to forget. Every indie author has to proofread and edit their own work to make sure it's perfect, but it can't hurt to get a second opinion. Why can't that second opinion be a website?

Check Your Grammar Online

 If you're not sure about a certain sentence or a certain passage in your book, and it's something I haven't already covered in one of my writing 101 posts, an online grammar checker can provide a simple, quick spot-check. There are several of them online, not all of them free, but I like this one best. You simply highlight the text you're unsure about with your mouse, copy it, then paste it directly into the blank box on the site. The corrected text will appear in the second blank box, just beneath the first. Words that have been changed will be underlined in both passages.

It's a very convenient tool, but it's not at all a viable way to proofread your entire book. Most grammar checkers cannot handle huge chunks of text; anything more than two paragraphs probably won't go through the system smoothly. You could spend hours, even days, checking everything paragraph-by-paragraph. It's a huge waste of time, and you'll serve your work much better by proofing it yourself. But if you do have something tricky you want to double-check, an online grammar checker is an easy, quick solution.

If changes do need to be made to your work according to the grammar checker, make sure you know why. The more your own understanding of the rules of language expands, the better your writing will be. It's very easy to rely on Internet tools to do a lot of the work, and sometimes it might even be necessary, but it's the author's job to be the word expert. Don't let the Internet become a crutch, and don't let it keep you from understanding the craft of writing. Internet tools should be used to help you expand your knowledge, not to keep you from learning.

Kindlegraph Your Books

Traditional authors definitely have the edge on indie book writers. Their books are put in print as well as digital editions, and their books are available in book stores and libraries. But the gap between indies and traditionals is getting smaller and smaller all the time. With kindlegraph, indies don't even need to put their books on paper to give away signed copies of their work.

 eSignatures

What goes perfectly with an ebook? An esignature from the author, of course. If writers can sign their paper copies, why can't you sign electronic copies of your work? Kindlegraph says you can, and I'm fascinated by the service. 

Getting started is amazingly easy. Simply go to the site and sign in with your Twitter account. Look for the blue author sign up link at the bottom of the page, and get your Kindlegraph account all set up. The system may not recognize your name immediately, so you'll probably have to manually add your books. Doing so is quite easy; you just need to enter the ISBN or ASIN number of the book. You can add all your books to the system, and you'll be ready to go. 

Once you're signed in and you've added books, go right to your account and you'll find new requests for each of your books. It's a nice little addition of the system, and a chance for you to practice your kindlegraph. Once you're in the system, you're free to accept kindlegraph requests at will. Promote the service to let readers and fans know you're offering it, and you might be pleasantly surprised by autograph requests. You're not going to make money from it, but it is a very nice little extra you can offer to readers, and it takes you one step closer to all those more traditional authors out there.

Review: The Super Spies and the Cat Lady Killer

 Lisa Orchard contacted me about writing a review for The Super Spies and the Cat Lady Killer, and I'm glad she did. It's a fun mystery read for kids, but even though it's peppered with pop culture references and lots of humor that will definitely appeal to the age group, Orchard knows how to be dark. Fear, suspense, thrills, jokes -- it's all here. I'm definitely not in Orchard's target audience, but I absolutely enjoyed this book.

The formatting and justification are perfect, always an important point, and I had to search hard to find a single mistake in the entire book. At no point does the story feel slow, and I wasn't even tempted to stop reading before the final page.

I very much enjoyed the main character Sarah, who is brave to a fault when she's seeking justice; Jackie, the fiercely loyal fashionista; and Lacey, the loveable klutz with a big heart...and two left feet. Together, they form the Super Spies, a group which soon includes a potential love interest for one of the girls. But they're not just playing detective -- they're playing a dangerous game that involves kidnappers, killers and secrets that go back three decades.

The plot is easy to follow, and overall the story is quite well-written. Early in the book, the Super Spies find themselves knee-deep in murder and in very real danger. There's more than one edge-of-your-seat scene, and thanks to Orchard's vivid writing I was frightened several times. Who will stop them first: the police...or the killers? 

The story unfolds beautifully, and I truly enjoyed the relationships and interactions in Sarah's life. The quick, close friendship she develops with Jackie feels very natural, particularly the quips they trade back and forth. The relationship she has with kid sister Lacey is equally poignant. I look forward to seeing how the characters develop in the next Super Spies mystery.

The term mystery is stretched just a little in the story, though in the main it does qualify for the genre. The killer is revealed very early, so there isn't much of a mystery about that, and the big twist for the second crime was easy to figure out even midway through the book. Some of the references are a little hokey and borderline unbelievable. The reporter named Scoop, for example, is just a little too precious. The fact that everyone in town seems highly supportive of these teenagers, who are clearly playing a dangerous game, goes beyond being farfetched. A scene near the end where the Super Spies get some recognition for their efforts is, in a word, preposterous.

But at the end of the day, the book is written for kids -- and kids will surely delight in the pulse-pounding action, the terror-inducing danger and the fact that together, four teenagers just might be smarter than an entire police department. Sarah is a heroine that's easy to believe in and look up to, and the warmth of friendship that permeates each page is sure to inspire good feelings. The book gives children the idea that they can do anything, figure anything out, so long as they stay true to themselves and to each other, and that is truly exceptional writing. Next time I find myself in a quiet little New England town, I'm sure I'll be looking around at the shaded houses and peaceful streets, wondering about all the many secrets that lurk beneath the surface...and peeking in library windows, hoping to catch a glimpse of the Super Spies.  

Writing 101: Forget About Formatting

 Good ebook formatting doesn't begin after you type the end of your story, it starts the moment you open the blank document to begin. I've talked about good manuscript formatting in the past, and it's pretty straightforward. But, if you really want to make it easy, there is another option: ebook templates.

eBook Templates 

Instead of formatting a blank document, you can always download an ebook template online instead. The template will have everything you need to write a book, and some things you might not: title page, dedication page, the text of the book itself, an "about the author" at the end. The best I've found are the CreateSpace templates offered by Amazon. They're downloadable in .doc format, the most common word processing software, and they're free.

Using a template is extremely easy. After you download the template you want, access it from your downloads folder (or wherever it is) and start putting your text into the template. Use your mouse to highlight the text in the template you're going to replace, and start typing your own text instead. The CreateSpace templates are already properly justified, so I can recommend them very highly.

Death Release Date Announced

At last, I'm prepared to announce a release date for Death (Deck of Lies, #3). And since I've waited so long about making the announcement, another piece of good news: you don't have much of a wait.

Death will be officially released on July 1, and I hear everyone in the U.S. is going to be setting off fireworks just three days later to celebrate (just a little nationwide soiree I whipped up in advance for your viewing enjoyment).

But...I'm not going to make you wait for the prologue. Go to my website right now, and you can download everything up to Chapter 1 right this very second -- just be advised that it's not a very long prologue.

Death is the longest book in the series to date, and yes, many things will at last be solved. You will know who killed whom, and why, and you will find even more lies hiding inside this installment of the Deck of Lies. You'll meet new characters, you'll find old characters and you'll even find out how Rain celebrates her Fourth of July (expect fireworks). The book's official cover will be unveiled soon, so keep an eye out, and I'll be announcing a special giveaway shortly after the release.

Deck of Lies in Paperback

After much re-reading and re-editing, tweaking and margin-moving, I am pleased to announce that the first two books in the Deck of Lies series are available in paperback -- with full back covers, and all! Just a little something for the reading purists out there. I'll also be releasing Death and Judgment to paperback when they're published (more news on Death to follow later).

The paperback version of Justice is 152 pages long, and sized to 8.5 x 5.5 -- making it perfect for display at a shelf near you.

The paperback version of The Tower is sized to match Justice. It's 160 pages long, which is barely enough room to contain all the many secrets.

And if you've decided to go fully digital, you can always get both Justice and The Tower on Kindle, Nook or in any electronic format of your choice at Smashwords.

Writing 101: How to Add a Table of Contents to an eBook

Let's face it: ereaders are awesome. They're lightweight, they're easy to hold, they can store thousands of books...they totally look like those electronic pads the characters on Star Trek walked around with all the time. I'm practically having a relationship with my Kindle. But if there's anything about reading ebooks that's not-so-awesome, it's the navigation. You can fix all that, and make the best parts of your book more accessible, by including a table of contents.

The TOC in the Modern Age

Many authors and readers consider the Table of Contents to be a bit of a wasted page in print books. Why tell me the names and location of every chapter, if I'm obviously going to find them while I'm reading anyway? But in the world of ebooks, the TOC is anything but a waste. For navigation's sake alone, you need to include it.

In ebooks, each entry in the TOC also acts as a link. Readers can very quickly and easily access a specific chapter anytime they wish...and don't you want them to keep coming back to your book, again and again? If they have to sit and page through tons of text, they're going to get frustrated and give up. Electronic things are supposed to make life easy.

Adding a Table of Contents also gives ebooks another invaluable feature: a bulleted read meter. Open an ebook, go to a random page, and look to the bottom of your ereader. See the line telling you how many pages or what percentage of the book you've gone through? When a TOC is in place, little tick marks will appear that show a reader when they're approaching a new chapter. It's a nice little feature, one that makes things easier and helps to naturally separate your text.

And if you still aren't convinced that you need a TOC for your ebook, then let this sway you: it's really easy to add one.

How to Add a TOC

 Adding a Table of Contents is no big deal, but it makes a big difference. There are approximately two ways you can go about it.

• HTML

Yes, it's almost always the answer to any ebook problem. Want to add something to your ebook? There's a code for that. And when it comes to adding a TOC, it's this: 

<div id="toc"> <p>Table of Contents</p>

<p><a href="#chapt1">Chapter One</a></p>

<p>a href="#chapt2">Chapter Two</a></p> 

and so on. 

Within the text of the book, you should place these tags around each chapter to link them to your TOC: 

<mpb:pagebreak />

 <h1><a name="chapt1">Chapter One</a></h1>

If you're using chapter titles or some system of your own, substitute "Chapter One" and all the rest with whatever you've used for your chapters. 

Frankly, it can be a pretty drawn-out affair, and if you get a single character wrong when you're writing out your HTML the Table of Contents won't work correctly. This is why I use my ebook conversion software, MobiPocket, instead. Load up your file, and simply hit the "Table of Contents" button to create it much more easily.

• The Easy Way

Luckily, there's an even easier way to create a TOC for your book: use Smashwords. There is no easier way to convert a .doc file into an ebook than this system, and if there is I haven't found it yet (but I'm open to suggestions). You cannot make use of this system if you're going to enroll your book in the KDP program. But if you aren't going the Amazon KDP route, Smashwords is absolutely the easiest way to go about doing this. Simply submit your .doc file to the system, go through the automatic conversion process, and download the Kindle-friendly copy of your own book free. You can get it in .mobi, .epub, .pdf and other formats. Here's the important part: Smashwords automatically generates a Table of Contents.

New Review: Falling in Love with Justice

 "I liked how thrilling and mysterious everything really was." Justice (Deck of Lies, #1) recently received a rating of "loved it!" at Livin' Life Through Books. Read the full review for more tidbits about the first book in the Deck of Lies series.